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    the struggle inside

    Post by Guest on Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:41 am

    Even though you’re far away
    I sit and wonder about the day
    Of the days past
    And the days to come
    Of the ones I’ve lost
    And ones to come

    I see the photos
    A girl u are but also mine
    A pop he was great and wise
    A mentor one of the many I looked up to
    And a girl that showed me life will be bright again
    All meaning the world to me

    All gone except for u
    You are mine and that is great
    The day I told you I loved you
    There was much to debate
    But as time grew on
    So did my love for u

    So as I sit here and struggle to be one
    Waiting for news from u
    I feel like knives are ripping me apart
    One by one another plunged deep into my heart
    As it twists I cry in pain
    After the pain comes the welcomed and yet unwelcome darkness

    As I sleep I dread the next day and the bad things that it could bring
    Sleeping is torture the knives come back and make me wish that I would wake
    When I do I just cry and wish it was me not u
    I cry about mistakes I made and how stupid some of them were
    As the day goes it shows that not everything will be good
    But still I try and push on and find something good
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    Re: the struggle inside

    Post by Murdoch on Sat Oct 09, 2010 11:46 am

    Nice poem Smile

    Just have to do this:

    I claim comment virginity. Smile



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    Re: the struggle inside

    Post by Guest on Mon Oct 11, 2010 5:22 am

    thanks murdoch im glad to have people read my poems,was honestly afraid to post them

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