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    When the river dams

    Post by redabashedenigma on Wed Oct 13, 2010 12:28 pm

    Well, i'm new at this but i guess this is what i'm supposed to do. here's a poem i wrote awhile ago..


    When the river dams

    When all has fallen
    When all has slipped
    When all hope has been stolen
    When all has been ripped

    When it seems
    That nothing will ever get better
    And it seems
    Your eyes couldn't get wetter

    When it seems
    That there is no reason left to live,
    All faith has been striped
    And you can't seem to forgive.

    When all happiness has been stolen,
    And every note has been silenced,
    Everything is left in dissonance,
    Never again to be balanced.

    When it seems
    You can't feel any more pain
    And everything you have done
    Has been in vain.

    When it seems
    You have no control
    And you realize
    Life is left up to a dice roll.

    When the pain becomes too much to handle
    And you release your grip
    Remember that at the end of the day,
    Everything could flip.

    Remember all the joy,
    Joy that has filled your heart.
    And remember not the pain,
    Pain that has ripped you apart.

    Remember the Man
    Who died for your sins
    So you could have happiness
    And a new chance to begin.

    Remember all the love
    That has filled your heart
    And hold on to Cupids arrow
    Even if it means a fresh start.

    Remember not how your river became dammed
    But how your will can never be jammed.
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    Re: When the river dams

    Post by Guest on Wed Oct 13, 2010 12:35 pm

    Very Happy
    Awesome
    Very well done
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    Re: When the river dams

    Post by redabashedenigma on Wed Oct 13, 2010 12:46 pm

    thanks

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