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    ~*The Show*~

    Post by Guest on Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:14 pm

    Lights out
    Curtains down
    outside empty
    inside is a magical town
    Everyone rushing
    trying to get things done

    Lights on
    curtains up
    crowd awaiting
    grace, beauty, charisma
    come out under the viel
    crowd quietly observe their masterpiece act
    A critic from behind observes taking mental notes
    Constrictive or destructive

    Lights out
    curtains down
    outside empties out
    inside a magical town
    but everyone's tired.
    Removing everything
    heading home.
    Everything shuts down
    This is our world
    Every day

    When lights go on
    And curtains go up
    We put on a show
    Once all over
    we go back into their crypts
    And our shells
    Allow the dark take us away
    a vicious cycle...

    The cycle of living.



    Last edited by Alcapon on Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:29 pm; edited 1 time in total
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    Re: ~*The Show*~

    Post by Guest on Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:29 pm

    I like this extended metaphore. Smile Maybe bring the critic into it a little more? ;P Well-done, hon.
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    Re: ~*The Show*~

    Post by Guest on Thu Oct 14, 2010 11:26 pm

    Damn critics that tell you how to rule your life
    Sometimes makes you hide in the shadows
    Gives you stage fright
    Some will coward
    Some will confront
    Damn you critics!!
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    Re: ~*The Show*~

    Post by Engi on Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:52 am

    ^ Just made me happy.
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    Re: ~*The Show*~

    Post by Guest on Fri Oct 15, 2010 7:06 am

    *kisses Al softly*
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    Re: ~*The Show*~

    Post by Guest on Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:04 am

    lol Glad it did Engi

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