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    Im not a poet but ill give it a shot

    Post by Guest on Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:08 pm

    this doesn't have a name

    Sliver,
    Slicing across black,
    The feelings return,
    The pain,
    The passion,
    The fury,
    The things welling up,
    Under the black escape,
    Like a torrent,
    A never ending flow of things,
    All connected,
    1 brings out another,
    And another,
    Always flowing,
    I cannot stop them,
    I don't want to stop them,
    These things,
    My feelings,
    The black,
    My skin,
    The silver,
    The knife,
    And so I start again

    Put down your feelings people said- so I did.
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    Re: Im not a poet but ill give it a shot

    Post by Guest on Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:12 pm

    And there we have a poem.
    A good one in fact.
    I like it.
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    Re: Im not a poet but ill give it a shot

    Post by Guest on Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:15 pm

    thanks.
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    Re: Im not a poet but ill give it a shot

    Post by Guest on Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:17 pm

    Passion, anger, love, sadness, frustrations, confusions and many more define poetry.
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    Re: Im not a poet but ill give it a shot

    Post by Murdoch on Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:27 pm

    I like it, Akimaru Smile It's good. Almost as good as my ones...XD, I keed, I keed. Smile



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    Re: Im not a poet but ill give it a shot

    Post by Guest on Fri Oct 15, 2010 9:58 pm

    I think it's quite good, Aki; good job. Smile I'm here if you ever need to talk, though.

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