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    Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:07 am

    Ok, so here's my second try at this. I can't remember which ones I've posted and which I haven't, so here goes....forgive me if there are repeats.

    SILENCE

    Silence is Golden,
    So they say.
    A blessing,
    hard to come by
    In today’s world.

    Funny.
    All I seem to get
    Is silence. The sounds around me
    Might as well be as nought
    For all the sense they make.

    The shouting and talking,
    Whispering, mumbling, murmuring,
    Screaming and laughing and chuckling and chortling,
    The sounds of friends and family and loved ones,
    All are absent, in my world.

    The laughter is muted, the talking is
    Suspended until further notice,
    The chuckling and chortling and whispering and
    Mumbling, all stopped and halted,
    Their absence deafening,

    The silence more ear-splitting then any noise
    Could be.
    Completely alone in this vast void,
    This dark space,
    This hellhole.

    Limbo and purgatory,
    Hell and Hel and Hades
    Would be welcome respites from this.
    No one around me, despite
    Their proximity.

    I call out,
    No one hears. Why am I not surprised?
    They can’t hear me,
    the real me,
    The Prisoner.

    Silence is Golden,
    So they say.
    A blessing,
    Hard to come by,
    Not in my world.



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 1:59 pm

    I like it Smile
    Makes me think of what a deaf man writes in his diary.

    P.S. Comment virginity for this is mine >: D
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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:29 pm

    Lol. Thank you; It has a dual meaning, if you look. The literal meaning is a deaf person, but the more metaphorical meaning is a scoial outcast, someone who never really gets involved, no matter how hard they try Smile



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:32 pm

    That was my second thought xD
    Anyways, I enjoyed reading it. I don't think I saw your other ones.
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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:44 pm

    Really? They are there, I'd imagine.
    Anyway, here's another one for your enjoyment.

    ODE TO A STONE

    Ah, a stone.
    The most simple of things,
    It is a stone and only a stone, made
    Of rock and nothing else. No
    Motives, ambitions,
    No needs

    To fulfil. It simply is.
    Cold, uncaring, as it stands
    The test of time. As its big brothers
    Stand against raging torrents, undaunted
    Unfeeling as it watches the world slowly
    Pass it by.

    If it had eyes, would it see
    The pain and the hurt in the world,
    And simply not care?
    Would it care if used with sticks,
    Would it care if thrown?
    Would it feel anything at all?

    Probably not, no. This stone
    Has no emotions,
    No soul,
    No friends,
    How lonely it would be,
    If it could feel such a thing.

    Alone against the elements, thrown
    Where they will it, dumped where
    They want. Nothing to comfort it,
    Nothing to care at all.
    How lonely an existence like that would be,
    Were it alive.

    This stone watches the world as it passes by,
    Not caring or feeling or thinking,
    Not really. It simply is,
    Or that’s what it tells itself.
    Better that then the other,
    Better that then the truth.

    Truth, you may say, what Truth?
    What Truth could there be of a stone,
    What deeper meaning,
    You’re rambling man, spit
    It out. The Truth? The stone
    That you’re hearing about? Well,

    Hello there.



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:59 pm

    Alright, can't really figure out this one. At one point it made me think of a younger sibling.. that could be the farthest thing from it's meaning, but it's what I got lol.

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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:01 pm

    Lmao...look at the last couple of lines again. Smile



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:06 pm

    Alright, I got a bullet this time.. But I doubt that's what it is.
    Care to share? Very Happy Or are you going to make me read it again Razz
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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:14 pm

    Go on, take a guess. If you get it wrong, I'll tell you what it's about. Smile



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:25 pm

    Final guess.. a unborn baby inside a womb. DON'T for the love of God ask how I got there, but it's what I got.
    Now, since that's probably wrong, tell me Very Happy !
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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:30 pm

    *sigh*. It's about an outcast, someone who never recieves intamacy and is therefore incapable of displaying it. Smile



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:33 pm

    ... I ignored the outcast factor. Thinking it was too obvious >.>
    *smacks herself V8 style*
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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:36 pm

    Lmao...how'd you get an UNBORN BABY????



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:41 pm

    I HAVEN'T THE SLIGHTEST CLUE. It just randomly popped into my head, and I'm like OMG THAT MAY POSSIBLY MOST LIKLEY NOT MAKE SENSE. So I said it.
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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:42 pm

    Lmao...You are a nutter XD Have you seen my riddle post? Mim is quite good, but I have some harder ones up my sleeve.



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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Burn It on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:44 pm

    NO. AND I LOVE RIDDLES.
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    Re: Murdochs Poetry take 2.

    Post by Murdoch on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:50 pm

    Lol...go to the word game section, it's in there.




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