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    My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Murdoch on Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:21 pm

    Ok. I will try one last time; I do need replies to say you want more, and I will be posting ALL of my poems on here. Smile

    JUDGEMENT

    Bathed in brilliant light, so
    Completely naked, exposed before
    The eyes of hundreds. being judged,
    Weighed,

    Measured.
    Do any of them know the real me? do any of them
    Even care? or do they, with their fiendish minds
    Seek to destroy what I have taken great care to build? my castle,

    My armour, my shield. all gone, all useless,
    Before the judging of my peers. I ask myself
    Do I even care? what do they know about me,
    To judge me so? do they know my thoughts, my

    Feelings? No.
    They do not, and for that reason,
    I turn, and walk off the stage,
    That is the pedestal of my life. the curtains close,

    The ultimate barrier between me
    And my fellow men.



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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Burn It on Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:33 pm

    I want you to keep posting, regardless of 'mores' D: !!!
    I like poetry.

    So I guess..

    I. Want. More!
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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Murdoch on Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:47 pm

    Here's another one, I guess...

    INCOMPARABLE

    How do I describe something
    That is indescribable?
    How do I compare something to something
    That is incomparable?

    I could describe the day,
    The way the noon-time sun shone, bright and warm
    On that summers day. The sweet, warm scent
    Of summer air, the feel of the cool grass in my fingers,

    And the warmth of mid-summer. I could not compare you
    To all these things, it wouldn’t’t be fair.
    These things are nothing
    Compared to you. The way your hair shines brighter than the sun itself,

    The scent of it, resting on my shoulder.
    The way your body feels, so warm, so
    Close to mine. I cannot help but wonder-
    Does the sun itself look down in envy, that it cannot shine as much as you?

    Does the moon watch in anger, that it cannot enchant me
    Half as much as you? Do other couples
    Look at us and glare
    At how we lie together, laughing together, without a care in the world?

    I wonder, then realize
    I don’t care.
    All that matters is you. I couldn’t compare you
    To anything-not the clear, blue lakes of scotland, that are

    Dirty and polluted, next to your eyes.
    not the beautiful Countryside of france, ugly and malformed
    compared to your face.
    Not the winter wonderlands of fairy tales, so black and disgusting

    Next to your pure, beautiful skin,
    Nor the exuisite rainforests of south america, which cannot
    Captivate me as much as your long, silky hair.
    Your voice,

    Your laugh,
    Ring truer to me than the clearest of bells.
    Your voice,
    Your laugh,

    More lovely than the greatest sonnet.
    Do swans gaze in sorrow,
    At your divine grace? You are truly an angel,
    And I wonder,

    What have I, a mere mortal, done
    To deserve such a miracle?
    What the Lord giveth, the Lord taketh away,
    But I am not scared. I had never truly lived,

    Until I met you. And I would give you up
    Without remorse, for all things must end, sooner
    Or later, and I am fortunate to have you now, so close,
    And I thank the Lord for whatever short time

    He has given me with his most perfect creation.
    Even this poem
    Does you no justice, and I apologize.
    For how can I describe something

    That is indescribable? The answer-
    I can’t. so I won’t even try.



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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Burn It on Wed Nov 10, 2010 3:32 pm

    Awwwwwh Murdoch's gone mushy ^.^ xD

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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Murdoch on Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:53 pm

    >Sad I have not! XD



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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Burn It on Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:57 pm

    *Pokes*

    Soft like a marshmellow.
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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Murdoch on Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:15 pm

    > : (

    Oh, have you seen my blog Smile Smile



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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Burn It on Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:16 pm

    No.. No I have not :O
    Is it here? Or on another site that your going to link me right this moment?
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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Murdoch on Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:21 pm

    It's here under the blog section Smile Please take a look Smile



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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Burn It on Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:26 pm

    *Leaves to read blog*

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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Murdoch on Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:27 pm

    yay ^_^ I was thinking that, besides the news, I would do a quick downlow of what's been happening to me that is of interest, and maybe putting my poetry in there. What do you think?



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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Murdoch on Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:31 pm

    Aaaand, I'm back. I know I haven't updated in a while, but...well, I wrote this poem about something that's been going on for a while...so yeah...



    STORM CLOUDS

    Storm clouds gather above,
    Summoned by my Grief.
    Whoever thought that I could hurt so much,
    Because of a little thing like Love?

    I gave you everything I had,
    My Love, my Adoration, my Sword and Honour,
    I offered you my Heart on a platter,
    And expected you to be glad.

    But you used me, strung me along,
    Treated me like dirt.
    You used me to make yourself feel bigger,
    And made me wish I'd never been born.

    I wish I never met you, never saw your face,
    Or laughed with you, Loved you as much as I did.
    All those times I pictured a future for you and me,
    I just wish I could erase.

    But I can’t, and you’re still with me,
    Even now that you’re gone.
    These scars that you’ve left behind you
    Are painfully plain to see.

    You’ve wounded me more than you could know,
    And that’s exactly what your problem is;
    You don’t think, you don’t pay attention,
    You dare not reap what you sow.

    I wonder if you think of me, if you look back and weep.
    Weep for the friendship that you lost, for the things that could have been.
    I wonder if you lie awake sometimes, like I do, late at night,
    The thoughts of you and I and pain that keep me from my sleep.

    Lord knows that I miss you, though you gave me hell.
    And even though I know I shouldn’t,
    I still dwell on your name, and wonder, "how on Earth
    Could you leave me such a shell?"

    Love is Pain and Loss is Pain,
    My Grief a pounding drum.
    My Anchor, Bedrock, Guiding Star
    Is all that keeps me sane.

    She treats me like I’m someone
    Worthy of attention, and the love I sought from you.
    She makes me feel important,
    Like, perhaps, you should have done.



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    Re: My continuous poetry post (take 3)

    Post by Al THLDI on Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:05 pm

    Deep an very nicely done Mumu Smile



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