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    Murdochs Epic Poetry Post :)

    Post by Murdoch on Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:06 pm

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    Ok, Guys. Posting some of my poetry here. Starting from the beginning, tell me if you want more Smile

    JUDGEMENT

    Bathed in brilliant light, so
    completely naked, exposed before
    the eyes of hundreds. being judged,
    weighed,

    measured.
    do any of them know the real me? do any of them
    even care? or do they, with their fiendish minds
    seek to destroy what i have taken great care to build? my castle,

    my armour, my shield. all gone, all useless,
    before the judging of my peers. i ask myself
    do i even care? what do they know about me,
    to judge me so? do they know my thoughts, my

    feelings? no.
    they do not, and for that reason,
    I turn, and walk off the stage,
    that is the pedestal of my life. the curtains close,

    the ultimate barrier between me
    and my fellow men.



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    Re: Murdochs Epic Poetry Post :)

    Post by Murdoch on Mon Oct 11, 2010 4:53 pm

    well, for my solitary reader, here is another one:

    NIGHT SKY

    We are all lost,
    Every one of us.
    Lost in the void, the endless sky.
    Dark, but not lightless-we fear

    The unknown, not the thing. We fear
    The lonliness, not the place. We are drifting,
    And until we choose a direction,
    We always will be. The world might seem Dark,

    Lonely
    Dangerous.
    But theres always a star-the north star, guiding us home.
    The closer we get, the more we can see,

    And see that we’re not alone-
    People all around us,
    Equally lost,
    Equally scared.

    It is then that we realise-
    We are all people.
    We are all equal.
    We are all the same, deep down.

    Looks are nothing, it whats inside
    That counts. We realise all of this,
    And wait for the others,
    Who are drifting

    In the night sky.



    there you are Smile I thought of it whilst staring up at the stars one night. Hope you like it, my lone reader...maybe I'm just not that good? Oh well. *shrugs*.



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    Re: Murdochs Epic Poetry Post :)

    Post by Murdoch on Wed Oct 13, 2010 1:03 pm

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    Re: Murdochs Epic Poetry Post :)

    Post by Murdoch on Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:47 pm

    *jumps up and down looking for attention*



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    Re: Murdochs Epic Poetry Post :)

    Post by Murdoch on Fri Oct 15, 2010 3:19 pm

    Well, I know no one is reading this anymore, but I'm gonna post just in case someone sometime in the near future decides to read this...

    THIS LOVE

    How do I describe
    This love?
    Absurd? Foolhardy?
    Doomed?

    No matter. All I know
    Is that I love you, plain
    And simple. I love you
    More than the moon

    The stars
    The sun, more than
    Life itself. I would do anything
    For this love, anything

    For you. You are my heart,
    My soul
    My life, although you don’t know it.
    How can you? I’ve never

    Told you the extent of my feelings,
    The strength of my passion.
    I must hide it well, then,
    Better then I give myself credit for,

    To hide it from you.
    You know I like you
    But you don’t know how much.
    I wonder

    Does it play on your mind,
    Does it nag at your thoughts?
    I wonder
    What do you feel for me,

    Though I have no right to ask.
    Is that nagging
    That thought, that I like you
    The reason we’re drifting apart?

    I see you, I talk to you
    But it happens less and less.
    It seems to me
    That you’re avoiding me, so

    I keep my distance. Am I reading
    The signs wrong, or are you feeling awkward?
    Are you feeling unsure how to act?
    I find that hard to believe. You always

    Seem so sure of yourself.
    Seem so in control.
    Is it then,
    That you don’t feel the same way,

    But you wish to spare my feelings?
    But what you don’t understand,
    Should that be the case,
    Is that this drifting,

    This ever-growing chasm between us
    Is hurting me more than anything.
    That I am falling into the darkness,
    Plunging beneath the ocean

    Further and further
    Every moment that the gap grows.
    So please
    Tell me how you feel,

    Reach out to me
    Pull me back from the chasm
    Rescue me from the ocean
    Tell me that I’m not alone.

    Tell me that things will get better.
    Please.
    I don’t care
    If you don’t feel that way about me.

    I don’t care
    If you only want to be friends. Surely
    That’s better than nothing?
    So please.

    Tell me how you feel,
    End the torture, end
    The pain. Please,
    This love is hurting me.

    This love is killing me.
    So please,
    Make it stop.




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