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    Eri
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    Wings of Enturnity

    Post by Eri on Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:00 pm

    So I made this poem a while ago... If anyone has any comments on how it can be made better they are WELCOME!
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    Wings of Enturnity
    Fly me to heaven
    Ripped form my back
    thrown on the ground and stepped on
    By no one but me
    did make my wings fall
    Choose ground over sky
    that's all

    People did push me
    did shove and prevoke me
    But nobody but I,
    may rip wings
    my very own wings
    from my back taking away the sky

    Choose ground over sky
    Choose ground over sky
    Though I knew I wished otherwise

    The wings made me separate
    they had to go
    I chose ground over sky

    Now that I can no longer choose sky
    I look up and ask myself why
    Why did I choose to be normal
    when I could be one in the sky

    The sky is full of laughter and light
    while the ground is cast in their shadow
    Ground may be better for some other guys
    but I do belong sailing up there
    I belong in the sky

    And now I take the wings I have stepped on
    and try to put them back on
    But nothing can change this choice I have made
    Because I chose ground over sky


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    Re: Wings of Enturnity

    Post by redabashedenigma on Thu Feb 03, 2011 11:18 pm

    nobody can help you write your poetry, it's all up to you :]
    this is a very nice poem, good job!
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    Re: Wings of Enturnity

    Post by Eri on Thu Feb 03, 2011 11:20 pm

    true. But I do have a tenancy to spell things wrong and put wrong words in. If there was anything wrong...
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