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    Sweet_Insanity92
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    Who am I??

    Post by Sweet_Insanity92 on Sun Feb 27, 2011 9:30 pm

    When did I become such a bad child?
    When did I start being "that guy"?
    I'm suddenly this rebellious chick,
    what happened to me? Who am I?

    What caused me to start running off
    and doing things I normally wouldnt dare?
    Why do I suddenly get into all this trouble
    and my attitude about it screams "I dont care"?

    I've never argued with teachers before,
    but now I'll play with them like a game.
    My respect for adults have wilted,
    what the heck? have I gone insane?

    My parents' orders mean nothing,
    they have less value than a penny.
    and the truth? ha! What about it?
    I'll tell them little...if any.

    My friends and peers are dead to me,
    and now they're just random strangers.
    I used to care about them oh so much
    but now only a memory of that barely lingers.

    How the hell did I get like this?
    when did I start acting like i was grown?
    nothing means anything to me anymore,
    not even the life I call my own.

    I should probably say I'll change
    but to be honest I dont give a damn.
    I dont care if you still like me or not
    because for now this is who I am.
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    AsherJayden
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    Re: Who am I??

    Post by AsherJayden on Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:15 pm

    Been there, done that.
    I like your way of writing.
    I like how you set up each stanza :]
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    Sweet_Insanity92
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    Re: Who am I??

    Post by Sweet_Insanity92 on Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:20 pm

    Thank you :]
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    redabashedenigma
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    Re: Who am I??

    Post by redabashedenigma on Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:05 am

    I agree with Asher :]

    beast, dude, even though i already read it before Razz
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    Sweet_Insanity92
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    Re: Who am I??

    Post by Sweet_Insanity92 on Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:21 am

    haha thanks, dude
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    redabashedenigma
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    Re: Who am I??

    Post by redabashedenigma on Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:26 am

    you're welcome

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