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    Getting over you (rough draft)

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:25 pm

    Okay! This is a one of a couple of songs that I made a couple of months ago, and I would really like it if I got some feedback on how I should fix it and if it was good or not! Smile
    PS: This is a rough draft, so it probably isn't that good!


    GETTING OVER YOU:
    It's a nice day and there's not a cloud in the sky,
    and just as I begin to say that we should make another try ,
    my friends don't like him,
    And I'll show you just how wrong you are.


    I sat alone and played guitar,
    You are my shooting star
    I remember the time we got caught in the rain,
    Lying in my bed again..


    I would lie and say i'm over you,
    Goodbye to everything I thought I knew,
    There's little hope,
    Baby you will find.

    I sat alone and played guitar,
    Down comes the reign of the telephone car,
    I remember the time we got caught in the rain,
    Why should I complain?

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    Re: Getting over you (rough draft)

    Post by Dawn on Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:30 pm

    to the recording studioooo =D
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    Re: Getting over you (rough draft)

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:39 pm

    D'awwweeee!
    Thanks you, Dawnsicles! Razz

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