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    Nocturnal State (another rough draft)

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:17 pm

    Okay! Another one of my songs that I made Smile Please give feedback, good or bad!

    I first saw you in a faded dream..lost at a distance.
    The way I hold you tonight should make it clear, not one thought has crossed my mind...
    Because I was afraid, I never could bare the truth of how you felt.


    I think of you every minute of the day,even in my nocturnal state...
    You are as graceful as a dove..
    I don't like anything about you...I love everything there is to you..
    You're just too good to be true.

    If we were together it would be magical, i'd see to make you happy even if things are tragical.
    Everything is as good as right,not one thought has crossed my mind..
    I hope to be together then be more that I must say, i'm always here to stay nothing more,
    It might have been a shoot out war.

    I think of you every minute of the day, even in my nocturnal state..
    But oh the games we play.
    I dont like anything about you...I love everything there is to you..
    You're just too good to be true.


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    Re: Nocturnal State (another rough draft)

    Post by Dawn on Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:29 pm

    =D
    yay =3
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    Re: Nocturnal State (another rough draft)

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:30 pm

    *coughs* More like boo! >__<

    Anything that I can do to make it better? :/

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